Final changes from review
After getting the review from my friend, I spent some time thinking about what changes I could make to the opening. A lot of the feedback was really helpful because it pointed out things I hadn’t noticed while filming and editing. One of the main things they mentioned was the music not really fitting the story. I thought about changing it, but I realized that with copyright issues and the music I already chose, it was better to keep what I had for now. They also said the plot was a little confusing and that it could be clearer what the girl’s intentions were. I didn’t make big changes to the story itself because the opening is only two minutes, but I did try to emphasize small actions and reactions more so the audience could understand the characters better. Another suggestion was to add more dialogue between the characters. I thought about it, but since I had already filmed and edited the scenes, I couldn’t really add more lines. Instead, I focused on highlighting the lines that...